NIP Chapter 483 Edited by Morisaki of Light Novels
Chapter 483 Edited by Morisaki of Light Novels
Chapter 483 Edited by Morisaki of Light Novels
"Huahuo, tell me, should I dress more formally before going over?"
Hanamaru Hanabi, who was sitting on the edge of the bed shaking her legs up and down, smiled and looked at Kai Uesugi, who was changing clothes in front of the mirror, "Kai-kun said that he didn't care, and he changed clothes in front of the mirror for half an hour."
Kai Uesugi put on a white shirt and looked at himself buttoning up in the mirror, "This is a sign of respect, no matter how you say it, the other party is also the editor in charge of Kadokawa Bunko."
"good."
He looked at himself in the mirror with satisfaction, turned his head and said to Hanamaru Hanabi who was sitting by the bed:
"Would you like to go with me, Hana-chan?"
"Kai-kun's work, what is Hanabi going to do?" Hanamaru Hanabi asked back.
"The main reason is that you are bored waiting at home. We can still go out together. The most important thing is that" Uesugi Kaoru paused here, deliberately keeping it secret, "The two of us go out alone, and we can still go on a date. oh."
"Dating! No, uh——" Hanamaru Hanabi sat up straight subconsciously, and then realized something, quickly covered her mouth, turned her face away and said, "No, you can't date! Kai-kun's favorability is not enough. .”
It stands to reason that as long as a person's favorability reaches zero, he will have no desire to approach that person at all.
And my current favorability is -5.
Although she has a -5 affection, she doesn't look like a -5 affection at all, and she is happy to hear that she can date.
In fact, she is actually looking forward to staying with herself.
Really. After so many dates, why are you still thinking about dating?
Uesugi Kai watched silently as she turned her face away in front of her, walked over, and knelt down in front of her.
Hanamaru Hanabi muttered: "Even if Kai-kun said more, Hanabi would not agree."
Uesugi Kai didn't speak, but took her left hand wearing the wedding ring and put it in his palm.
Her hands are a bit cold, and they are still very small and slender, and the bones seem to be soft.
"Does Hanabi like dating?" Kai Uesugi looked up at her.
Perhaps reading an inexplicable emotion from his eyes, Hanamaru Hanabi did not turn her face away, but nodded in front of him.
"Then let's go on a date again when our favorability level increases again. This time we'll go to a different place, a place that Huahuo has never seen before."
"what is the place?"
Kai Uesugi lowered his head and remained silent for a long time this time, took her little hand, and rubbed the slender finger carefully, "I have never told anyone about the deep part of my heart, neither does my mother, nor does my father. I just want to share it with you."
Hanamaru Hanabi understood him very well, and also understood the emotion he had in saying this.
In fact, she was also very happy in her heart, glad that Mr. Zhao cared about herself so much.
"Then Kai-kun, remember what you said to Hanabi." Hanamaru Hanabi stretched out his other hand, which turned into a pull hook in front of him.
Uesugi Kai watched her small movements of pulling the hook, laughed, stretched out the little finger of his right hand to pull the hook with her, and the thumbs touched each other, "I remember, I will remember every promise I made to Huahuo, for me There is no cuter girl than her."
Kai Uesugi started writing light novels not to create some emotions out of thin air, nor for money, but really wanted to write his thoughts and love for Hanabi into it.
Her cuteness, her smile, her joy, her happiness
Scenes of scenes engraved in his heart, unforgettable pictures, he wanted to write them down.
So the name of this light novel is also very simple, it is called "Hanabi no Love", and the name of the heroine Hanabi Chiwa is also the same, it all comes from her.
At first, Huahuojiang didn't approve of the name, saying it sounded weird.
But if you calm down and take a closer look.
"Love of Fireworks"
Isn't that good too?
Kai Uesugi didn't tell Hanabi that this novel could be regarded as a belated love letter he wrote to her.
After all, as soon as she confessed to her, she gave herself completely to herself, and she didn't even have the time to try writing love letters and other pursuit methods.
If you want to blame, blame her for being too good. Really too good.
Using a light novel as a love letter, haha, when you think about it, it's still very romantic.
Before going out, Hanamaru Hanabi ran from the bedroom to the entrance with a scarf, helped Uesugi Kai wrap it around his neck, and said to him in a weak voice: "Kai-kun, it's a bit cold outside, wear this before going out .”
Seeing her carefully helping him wrap the scarf in front of him, Kai Uesugi was so absent-minded for a moment that he even forgot to say thank you to her.
Thank you
In fact, no matter how many times I say thank you, it can't be worth her sincerity to me.
Kaoru Uesugi thought about this, got on the tram, followed the tram slowly on the track, listened to the ding-ding sound outside the tram and looked out the window, all kinds of thoughts flickered in his mind.
I hope that the light novel "Hanabi no Love", which is a love letter to Hanabi, can be successfully signed.
"Are you Mr. Uesugi Kai?"
"Ah."
In a coffee shop near Kadokawa Bunko, Uesugi Kai, who arrived early, saw the editor-in-chief named Morisaki Taiichi in front of him.
Wearing a work suit, short hair, glasses, and a medium to thin build, he has a hemorrhoid under his right eye, which is easy to remember his characteristics.
And, very young.
As soon as the other party saw Kai Uesugi, he sat across from him, put down his briefcase, then stood up with a smile and stretched out his hand and said, "Hello, Mr. Uesugi, my name is Taiichi Morisaki, and I am an editor in charge of the light novel department of Kadokawa Publishing House. "
"Hello." Kaoru Uesugi replied.
Editor Morisaki sat down: "Mr. Uesugi looks very young, what is your current occupation?"
"College Students."
"May I ask. Where does Uesugi-san study? Ah, sorry, I'm not too inquisitive about your privacy, but I just want to get acquainted with you so that I can contact you in the future."
Kai Uesugi did not reply immediately, but thought for a while and said, "Tokyo University."
He originally wanted to say that he was a student of Dongda University and was studying at Dongyi University, but it was difficult to explain it clearly, so he just said Dongda University.
"Tokyo University? Is that so?" Morisaki Taichi turned around in a little surprise, took out a stack of documents from the file bag, pushed them out and handed them to him, "I have read Mr. Uesugi's novel yesterday, and this is what I read In the evening, I specially annotated some content that can be modified and added appropriately, and Mr. Uesugi can take a look."
Did you even edit it on purpose?
Kai Uesugi did not expect this editor to be so responsible. Other publishers have submitted their own manuscripts, but so far there has not even been a reply.
Morisaki Taichi handed the manuscript to Kai Uesugi and waited patiently.
Kaoru Uesugi read it carefully, and there were not many corrections. Instead, he explained it thoughtfully. While respecting his original intention, he optimized the conflicts of the plot and the details of the character performance to a certain extent.
After a long time, Kai Uesugi put down the manuscript in his hand and let out a sigh of relief.
"What do you think, Uesugi-san?"
"I think it's very good. There are many things I haven't noticed." After reading this annotated version, Kai Uesugi had to lament the level of the editor.
This is something that people with no experience in the industry will not notice at all.
There are connecting hooks between the plot and the plot, which makes people look completely smooth and smooth.
"Now that Mr. Uesugi has finished reading the advantages, I will now talk about the current shortcomings of this novel."
Uesugi Kai saw Editor Morisaki's upright face, and couldn't help listening seriously.
"First, your beginning is very good, from the protagonist's frustration, to the rescue of his childhood sweetheart and accidentally telling him his dream, to the help of the protagonist who rekindles hope in life.
"The protagonist is very grateful to this childhood sweetheart, who rekindled her life. However, when everything was going well, the bad news came. The childhood sweetheart and her mother suddenly left one after another. The protagonist fell again and was even more frustrated than the last time. .
"Such dramatic ups and downs will immerse readers in it, and readers also want to see how the protagonist will help her realize her last wish with her childhood sweetheart.
"The story is up to here, no problem, completely ok, but you have to establish some bonds for the hero on the way out of Tokyo, such as meeting new friends and new characters. With these things, the hero is not just Living for the last wish of his childhood sweetheart, he is also caught in the struggle between friendship and reality. At the same time, you can also hook up more things through the friends of the hero; If the group has a negative impact, or has an impact on the fate of the heroine Hanabi Chiwa, these must be constructed in the early stage."
Uesugi Kai listened quite seriously.
Morisaki Taichi looked at him and said, "Second, I suggest adding a heroine."
"add one?"
"Yes, add one more, this heroine can have no obvious feelings, can have a good relationship with the first heroine, and most importantly, can continue to help the hero in many careers, and the hero can also like her."
"What is the purpose of this role?"
"The entanglement of feelings, the tangle of choices, the entanglement of whether the heroine will stay or not, these complex emotions that can be used as articles, are all things that will make readers feel nervous. With these, when they fall in love with this character, they will be more excited. I care, and I don't want to lose."
Uesugi Kai listened to these words and was silent for a while. Is this the level of a professional editor?
Taichi Morisaki expressed indifferently: "The light novel Mr. Uesugi wants to write is not the ordinary light novel, I know it. Although the number is small, but you pay attention to emotional choices, the hero is struggling between reality and love choices, It’s not that there are many works that are not cute and set, and there are many successful examples. You are a student of the University of Tokyo and have a high cultural quality. I believe you can describe this emotion. I also hope that you can seriously think about it."
While waiting, the time in the coffee shop seemed to freeze.
Kai Uesugi breathed a sigh of relief, subconsciously glanced at the manuscript paper at hand, and said to the editor Morisaki in front of him: "Thank you Morisaki-san, your words have benefited me a lot, but I wrote this work mainly to write about the character of the male protagonist. Love for the heroine."
Morisaki nodded a little: "I know, it's the setting of the second heroine that I said that you can't accept?"
"Yes."
Taichi Morisaki put away his serious expression as an editor, and said with a smile: "Mr. Uesugi, there is no need to worry. The love of the heroine is unique to the heroine Hanabi Chiwa, but for the second heroine, it is another emotion." ?”
Another emotion. Kai Uesugi seemed to understand something, and continued to listen attentively.
"Mr. Uesugi, love is a kind of emotion, and it is also a kind of emotion that can be misunderstood, such as sympathy, respect, love, admiration, these emotions may be misunderstood as love, you just need to deal with emotions skillfully Some, in the end, let the male protagonist wake up instantly and understand who his true love is. Of course, we can change this kind of old-fashioned plot slightly and add more twists, so we don’t have to misunderstand it. , but a necessary real choice. In short, as long as it revolves around deepening the love between the hero and the heroine, it will be completely fine."
"How to implement it?" Uesugi Kaoru asked proactively.
Editor Morisaki began to help Uesugi Kai deduce some storylines based on his years of experience.
After chatting for three hours, the meeting finally came to an end.
There was no time to drink the coffee, and it was put aside so cold that no one cares about it.
Editor Morisaki stood up and stretched out his hand: "Although Uesugi-san is a newcomer, I can understand that you have great talent in creating."
Kaoru Uesugi also stood up and shook hands with him, "I have benefited a lot, and I also thank Editor Morisaki for looking up to me as a newcomer."
"Haha, let's go here first today. When Mr. Uesugi has revised the manuscript, you can contact me at any time. I will review it several times. If it is suitable, there is no need to revise it, and I will arrange for printing and publication immediately."
"Thank you, I will trouble you today."
The two exchanged pleasantries for a while, and the submission of today's novel was settled smoothly.
Walking out of the coffee shop, Kaoru Uesugi got on the tram to go home.
Thinking that there was no food at home, Kaoru Uesugi went to the supermarket again to buy some ingredients for cooking firework, and the instant bento he ate in the morning.
Alas, ever since there was no fireworks for breakfast, Kai Uesugi always felt that something was missing in his life.
When I think of her, my heart is hot.
Checking out the supermarket at the cash register cost a total of 2352 yen.
I once told her before that she is my accompanying sun and the only one in my life.
Kaoru Uesugi suddenly remembered that besides the illustrations of girls on the cover of the light novel, there was also a bunch of strange slogans. If you write this sentence in, Hanabi-chan will definitely understand it when you see it.
With her character that is so easily moved, seeing that he loves her so much, wouldn't his favorability increase gradually? !
Uesugi Kai looked at the top of the blue sky in the afternoon, and the sun hiding under the white clouds thought to himself:
Hanabi, Hanabi, my love for you will never change.
I have been looking for the sweet love between us.
And willing to give everything and all efforts for this.
(End of this chapter)